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RuneScape Warrior by Vaporage RuneScape Warrior by Vaporage
Picture of my Runescape Avatar.
(Runescape is a Browser Based MMO)

:D

Feel free to critique.

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This is a fan art from the game Runescape, if you don't like Runescape just leave and don't leave a comment, unless its positive.

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I don't know how far the completion of this painting is, since you edited the description a few times. It still feels like a work in progress to me.

A few things I notice as soon as I saw it: the composition is ok and the details are present. I like the way you enhanced his corset (I don't know the English word for it, lol)

What I would point out for improvement is the fire, the skin and the swordblade. If you look at photos of skin in front of fire, you'll notice that it will turn darker towards the fire, and then suddenly appear a lot brighter. Fire is mostly yellow and orange, but the glow around fire in objects in front of it, are mostly a bright red (like the neckpart of the helmet)

The skin seems a bit dull. Maybe you used too much grey in it. A little bit of saturation could do miracles I think.

The blade of the sword could be enhanced too. Maybe browse around for images of blades and see what light does to it. You'll be surprised how complex it is.

I hope you have the courage to take this to the next level. It's what critiques are for!

Take care

:peace: Yannick
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basketbuzz Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
looks great but the plain grey background makes it seem unfinished
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Deathbringer-6k Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Way cool! 
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D3M0N-G4M3R Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
4 years down the track and still people like you are so much better than the game designers. damn jagex needs to fix runescape. well done very impressive
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Mikequach Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow nice drawing like runescape and still playing it im just a nerd but nice drawing
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Pink7777 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
Awesome!
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Ew-boi Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Lol. People just love to trace over things, don't they?
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Tyler4343 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Hey this art work is beautiful! Dont you guys hate leveling in runescape lol I do I use the bots here -> [link]
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Nimrohd Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Here, have a shame badge->:(
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Omegawarzone Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Hey, some dope at /r/gaming felt like tracing over this. Felt like you ought to know.
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Vaporage Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's okay. I don't mind if people do that.
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